SSS-FIELD

Ahhh, it’s the autumn time for me to yield

To my driveway which seems to be sealed

The rustle of leaves is the result I’ve reeled

The bamboo rake is the weapon I wield

To make a pathway stripped away, peeled

in a huge, colorful blanket-looking field.

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  1. Excellent autumn poem with fun rhymes 🙂

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  2. Seasonal Six 😀 It transported me to early childhood. Originally from the Northeast, I am quite familiar with raking leaves! When we were kids, we’d jump into giant piles that were raked before bagging. It was a blast. Not such a blast when I got older and was the one who raked all those leaves!

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    • Me, too. Nearby Princeton was a carpet of brilliantly covered leaves. When i lived in nearby NC, i mentioned that pile of leaves and was told there might be snakes under that pile. It tarnished my picture and i stopped scuffing the leaves when i took my walks. Boo Hoo.

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  3. Pat Brockett

    Your SSS is easy to envision and to hear. I so much prefer the sound of a bamboo rake to that of a metal one. Nice SSS.

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